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for the body help, much appreciated.
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First off, the hands are an issue, i see how youve hid them slightly, but its an issue to me, the hands look a little like stumps, and need more definition anatomically.
The chest area i feel wouldnt be that shape, well, with bandages they would be tight around her chest and they would be very up, bandages cant offer the similar support as a bra would.
the lining needs more pracise there is a lot of jerking in the lines which makes it look off.
The colouring is okay, there should be more contrast though, if the light is behund her there would be very little light on her at all, so youve lit it wrong.
The main issue, in my eyes is texture and the way you shade, your just using block strokes, if you cel shaded this would work, but as your not, i would drop the opacity and blend away!
However, as much as ive probably made you a little depressed, i really like the atmosphere, the attitude in the face and the eyes in the background is a lovely touch!
Keep it up!
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